Wow thats really deep. Love can be the sweetest thing or the worst, and you dont know which one you have till its too late. But I hope your life gets better soon and it has to, cause good things come to good people. So keep up the good work and keep writing and if you have time check out some of my poems

This it really good keep it up
metal king AKA sebastian

Believe it or not this reminds me of a girl i know she might feel this way bout me but if she does she couldnt be more wrong

So sad n i like it in a sad way

Heya great job! Deep emotion.. i can relate to it..keep it up =) luv nomz xo

Your magic, you have gr8 flow huni, i hpe your carring you head up high and your now away frm your family and happy.xox stand tall missy

Beautiful poem. 5/5. so sad. ur really good at writing poems. keep writing.