Comments : In somone else's arms

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Aww hun nice job i know who you feel it's hard when that one just walks away. hope it get better 4 ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    Hey, Great poem! I could feel the emotion in every line. But my favorite lines were:

    "torn apart, my soul cries out

    love hurts, but I still have no doubt's

    this will heal, like all my past scars

    but until then, atleast I won't cry in somone else's arms....."

    Again, great job!

    ~Anthony