This is sad, but it's good..It should be in the sad or dark section ...keep up the good work .

Awwwww, sweetie thank you so much for the comments, it means alot to me, chika, im also 13 almost 14 though. so yeah you write very well, Trisha

I actually don't like poems that do not rhyme but this one was really good. It just flowed and left a strong impression!

Awww, wow I really like this poem. You did a really nice job on it....keep it up! bye