Very well done sweety. I like this poem a lot. Sea, night, snow, fire, very beautiful. Sometimes I feel that way to, that I'm my worst enemy. You wrote it down in a beautiful way. Perfect. 5/5 Excellent. Take care sweety -xxx-

Oh my. I really like this one. It has alot of truth and meaning behind it.
Kudos!

Hey,
thanx for commenting on my poem "The sky is Black" anywyas, this is a well though up poem! great flow and though! i liked how I almost had a feeling of being where it was you were talking about! anyways, thats whatI wanted to say 5/5
-Rachel

Aw hun great poem. I hate that yo're feeling so sad though.
Your vocab was brilliant i felt a part of that experience like no other..
I hope you're ok
take care
anna xoxoxo