Comments : XxSweet Dreams....Last poemxX

  • 18 years ago

    by kkly

    .........
    wtf babe....
    Whats going on¿ baby talk to me....
    plz....
    luv ya

  • 18 years ago

    by kkly

    No...baby...dont do that...
    I need ya,,dont run away now!!!!
    Wut about brittany...???
    wut about us...
    damn baby talk to me....
    plz dont hurt ya..baby....xox
    --kly hugz u tight--

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww sweetie this poem had me in tears. I've read your other one so i know you're here but i'm so sorry you felt so low the day you wrote this. Like lil o said..let it out...anything just don't let go of life..things will turn out better..
    god baby don't let go..
    xoxoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    This was a good poem, great job! I liked how it didn't have to rhyme andyou still got your point across--not many poets can write like that.

    -Taylor