Aww... very expressive. this kinda happened to me before... although i still think of him often... with his girlfriend. good job! 5/5 ;)

Very very good. and i know exactly how you felt here. its nice to know i wasnt the only one.

Whats Funny is right after I wrote this poem I found out that the girl i had wrote this for had wrote a poem about my friend and its on here too and its called How Could???

Yeah i no too, i think i treated a guy this way recently... and i think we both felt the same way... we loved each other, but lost each other. very good 5/5

5/5! I can't get enough of your work! I will stop commenting now, b/c I know you HAVE to be getting tired of hearing me jabber on. :D

It's good but it put a little strain on me to read it because there is no line spacing or anything, its just a lovely paragraph. Lol, thats what I say you can fix.