I luv this poem Lauren. Hope it all works out. But this is like one of my favorties!!

Listen, im sorry i dont hug anymore, alright? times change, people change. and if you want a hug, then come to me and tell me that. ive already said it, if someone wants a hug from me, then they will come to me for it. and if not, im not a mind reader, so i want know they want a hug. sorry ive changed, but people change.

Another great poem. i can't quite decide though which is my favorite stanza. its either one, five or six, but the poem as a whole was fantastic. emotion and heart felt. loved it. and incase i haven't mentioned it...i think your a very talented writer, much better that i

Brad

Wow this is really good,i can really relate to every word. 5/5. please comment mine.

-jorden

Very creative...keep it up!

I know so many people who can relate to that.. I love the flow of it