Well this one is nice. i liked the way of writing. good job! keep it up!

So true.. i believe in all those quotes... I guess, you and I share the same impression on things....

take care..

Love,
Ipsita

Wow!
i really loved it..like the idea..the rhythm..everything.
From the first day i 'met' you, you've definately improved..well done
love,
xoxox

Let's see...

# if time is the only best heal
* the why for so many years, pain is only i could feel

about this line...don't worry...nothing wrong with it...about time can heal pain...I don't agree...now I'm saying my opinion...based on the sentence...I think u don't agree either...well...just saying what I think...nothing 2 do with this poem...what's the different if u r given a year or a decade...to forget about one thing...do we really need such long time to forget something...as everyday is a different day...u can just forget about something one day...it's not the time that will make us forget...it will only make our memories fade away slowly...not erase it totally...if u do not wish to forget...no matter how long it takes...u will still remember it...well...I'll quit babbling now...lol...just want to say it out..:P...

Neway...I like the way you write your poems...all of them are different and unique...well..can't see any other poems like this...can u?

Hey, that was really unique. I really loved the way you wrote it. you're
a great poet. keep the good job.
take care,
marjan

Wah, kya vision hai tumhara. Aur kya kahe? lol.... Be positive yaar! :-) You had to meet me a while back. Very creative response though. I admire your creativity.

Love
Michelle