Hi
honestly speaking i liked the previous poems more. but still good job!

That was so good... sad and touchy...
you've got talent..

Love,
Ipsita

Wow awesome poem Nitin...
i'm sorry someone made you feel like this..
take care xoxo

O wow i so remember how this feels and it hurt me to know some one else is feeling this way. keep your head up. nice job nice way with words and getting you feelings out keep up the good work

Great! Loved it *Props* Keep on writing!

-Jin

Incredible! They type of writing that makes you sit make and let it soak in. thank you!!!

OMG I really really love this one i can really relate...i know how you feel and it's horrible tht u ahve 2 go thru this aswell..i hope things get better..keep up the good workd xox

Is your heart still numb now...hope not...I think not...if u r able to write a poem...hmm...ok...nice poem...I see you try to make it rhyme...nice try...

I feel so helpless while i turn to my right.. will there be someone to save me from this plight?

Banda haazir hai! Arrey yaar, main hu naa? lol...

Nitin
This is a poem full of so much sadness and pain. It can almost cry itself. Excellent job on the emotion.

i know for all these years i have been a game for you
someday you will know what you have put me through

These lines cut right through my heart. To know you have felt this way. Makes me wish I could be there with you.
Love Cindy