Short and good expressions....

What kills first-smoking or life

I really liked this part..it was a short poem that was easy to read. Good job

Ha. I liked how you tried to rhyme Russian with crushing. Perhaps you could abbreviate it to chrusin'? Oh well. Up to you.

The line that states: That is like game with rolling the dice.
I felt it was choppy English. That is like THE game with rolling the dice maybe? Oh well. It was an overall good poem. I'll give it a four. No you don't have to return the favor. Only if you feel like it.

I like this one better than 2