I loved it, it's wonderful! So sad... You should write more like this one:)

Keep it going!:)

Omg
i friggin love this one!
so much feeling
this is exquisite...
lookin forward to more!

Love
Tina
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Wo, you could make a sick death metal song off of this mate. ;]

Pretty good poem but a very depressing one, but at the same time pretty cool

yaz.

That was you gr8 work. you realy have a talent. very aggressive. take care

I love this poem. It's beautiful.

Did you kill her? HA!

Very nice write!

Wow,
lovely poem mate :)
5/5 deffinately.

O LORD !! SUCH AN INCREDIBLE PIECE !!
5/5

Its very nice poem indeed...

So sad.... It's great anyway

Well done... such a lovely poem though decorated with sadness. God bless you!!!

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