Wow this was beautiful.. Its really refreshing to read something with a different rhyme scheme. and the words you chose were perfect. Nice job.. thanx a bunch for your comments

G8 poem loved it keep it up 5/5

Absolutly amazing job. great style of writting. keep up the good work! smilee

Whoa! this is my favourite poem of yours so far! Seriously good. I really like the personification and the metaphors used, especially about the stars being 'tears of light'.

Oooh!!! i love poems about the moon and this one is just spectacular! the imagery and language!!! ooh my!
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