I love that
its a lil short but its great
its kool..
email me some time
it seems like we have a lot in common
Great job
5/5

Pretty good, though I wish you could make it longer.

That was really good I know wut you mean it has happened to me b4 to and it realyy sux> Cuz when u think something is going so perfect and u blink for 1 second it all just seems to fall apart. well i really liked it keep writing

I WANT U TO WRITE SOME MORE POEMS
I LVOE UIR WRITING
U HAVENT WRITEEN IN A long TIME!!