Hey,it's good.but next time write what's wrong with my poem,not just that it sux.read my newest poems,not all of them suck,read "my own frankenstein" and your's is good you have a lot of mixed emotions involved in it.and you should change your profile to your real age and gender.it says your 1 and a male,obviously you aren't with a name like kristen, and a boyfriend.newayz,comment on more of mine and great job!!