Wow.. Good poem, sweetheart. Very well written. Short and powerful:) It's amazing. Keep it up. *hugs*

~Jessica

Thanxs

Nicely done, Derek. Makes for a very visual picture for the reader. Scarey though.

Wow. i love this. and you used so little words...
amazing.
lauren

Derek, this is such a great peom. has jessyca read it? well, talk to ya l8r!

~Brittany~

Wow i love it.keep it up