Seriously, this is one of the best poems i have read in a while, you have a lot of talent so keep writing. I loved your poem, it was really well written and meaningful 5/5 x

Hi, i call my scars my art aswell...thats heaps good..i feel ya pain hunny..mwah

Hmm niice i esp like:
I'm doomed forever to remember
that I'm the one who lost the key.
deep. i also reallylike the fairy tales stuff. but the flying and the line after that are sort of cliche. but i do like it. nice job

Awesome poem. another one I can relate to. I agree with Poonam about the lines"I'm doomed foever to remember,
That I'm the one who lost the key".
I also like the last line about your scars being art. nice job. keep writing.

Leanne,
This poem was really beautiful, actually it reminded me of some of my own I hope everything is okay.
God bless
Renee