Hey hun... I really enjoyed that and whoever rated that a 3 should feel ashamed of themselves! lol keep it up huny that was a great job. thankyou so much 4 the comment! :) Ruthie $hearts;

Not entirely great. It did have this concept but it wasn't really attainable. Some interesting imagery but not really wowing. It's just the words chosen. They weren't exactly as awe inspiring as they could have been.
~Faith-less

I dun think that this deserves the rating that it has, I think it's good, though the message is sad...

Ravyn

This poem is so sad. I liked it a lot though, I really liked these lines: Why in the night do you run to her,
Why in the day do you laugh with her, ;;;
Though they are sad they stilll piece together all the pain or saddness you had. This is something like what I write. 5/5 Keep up the good work