This is a good poem.

keep up the good work!!

Hey this is my friends name(my name is Lin check my stuff out sum time please) but i just want to say that although your poem seems a little lost in translation its self, i get what ur going for. a confusion no one can explain. 5/5 for thought.

Wow that is deep once under I exspecially love the un
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thing, you had some grammar mistakes, and impossible was all capitalized and that, fix it up and it will be awsum oh! and btw u might want to put the u in under under the line so it stands out more.
good work I love how you express yourself