Hi Bhavin,
one thing is common in all your poems - they all speak with a lot of emotions. and that my friend is one of the most important things in writing.

the only flaw i find in this piece of work is that in a lot of places, the rhyming seems forced:

Where your values are considered as small as a wrapper
and

But there still lies something called hope
And bliss is achievable by having some dope

I really think you have some great talent. hope to see your work hitting the top page soon!!

good luck and peace
shobhana

ps- aapke mail id bhejiye and we can keep in touch

And ambitions are as high as a skyscraper.

Waw....
ur poems comes from your heart and speaks to the heart...great poem..keep the good job up...and if u have time do plz visit some of my poem..