So sad. This is a sad poem and im sorry if this is about you....hope you feel better and talk to you later.

Good work Raychel :)

Mallori

Great poem...loved it...keep writing

I love that poem and i kno how helpless u can feel.... awesome stuff girl, i am going to bc sound on sat. w/lisa and u can come too.....
love ya lots,
sore

I luv this! its so original!

xxxxx

p.s. thnx 4 the comment..i look like 200 lb

Aww
thats realy sad , but a great poem
5/5
keep it up

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You have a strong style of writing, and are gifted at really making the reader feel how you felt...excellent job. keep up the good work

Gd