WoW! I am seldom at a loss for words....wow. If a woman wrote that for me....TROUBLE......I may never leave the house.

Good poem, u are a very good poet!

This is something I definatly don't want to know about a cyber mom doing LOL jk jk...That is something special and something to treasure! I liked this peice...something showing about your love yet wasn't to graphic...PERFECT FOR MY ANGELIC EYES :)...Love ya
~Chelsey~

Oooh, I like! It's so passionately written.
"Caressing your inner soul with my finger tips", love that line! It's really awesome!
The third and fifth stanza were also very well crafted. They kept the momentum by adding to the intensity.
Awesome, awesome....keep it up~Holly

Damn Luanne.. I have the sudden urge to make sweet love now. Great story, two thumbs up on this one!

I love this poem!

WOW.............
Romantic and so very passionate. Beautifully written....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Wow you are an amazing writer. i love it!!! keep writing!

Luanne,
This was so romantic and filled with passion......beautiful and what an awesome job....You're blessed with talent girlfriend....

Love ya, Ann

Great poem.

Wow!!! lovely poem. well done :) written nicely, one of my favourites! Rosie xXx

Wow, well written. Awesome poem you've got my rating at 5!

You have really relayed your feeling well.......brings back memories

So romantic

That was AMAZING!

Beautiful! Well done.

Wow... good poem.
~neens~