Comments : JEALOUS QUEEN

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Wow i can really relate to this poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Thats how it was with me but believe me if he cant see your beauty then he aint worth it, if he cant see you hurting then his a jerk and if he cant see that he means the world to u and u doint mean the workd to him then he will brake your heart without a second chance so dont let him do that girl. dont make the mistake i made. if he let you down once he'll do it again, there are only so many chances you can give but in the end its up to you but follow your mind not heart nad try for my sake if not yours not to let yourslef be used. thanx and goodluck. great poem a definit 5. simple yet effective and filled with the pain you feel. i can tell it came from the heart.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ladida

    Dang! I like this poem a lot and I can completely relate to every word! That new girl for me just happens to be my "best friend". It hurts and it's so annoying, but it gets better. I've many many broken hearts, and they all hurt but they also all heal in time! Good job and good luck!