Oh my God...Thats so sad....I really loved it. Keep on writing! *Props*

-Jin

Great job hun
i like it
5/5
its kool

I love that line.
"A bottle and grin is how it all begins
A fist and a fight is how it all ends."
That's brilliant, m'dear. 5/5
Riot xxx
P.S
Could you read my poem Hack and comment? Ta. =D

Thanks. =D Means a lot. Yeah, if you could read as many as you can and comment on all that would be great. I'll do the same, as well, of course. =D
Riot xxx