Good one Neo. i don't understand it, but the meaning sounds sad.

Hey, that was beautifully written neo.
I loved the way you wrote it. you did
a really great job on it. that was relly unique. I enjoyed reading each line
of it neo. keep it up.
much love,
marjan

Wow that was like really awesome!!!i loved it! it must be kinda cool though livin in spain!!email me sometime!!
blinkobsesser182@yahoo.com
XOXO
Ashley

Neo, very good writiing! I really enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing!

First of all, I'd like to thank ya for the comment :) N cool you live in Spain, been there twice n luv it.
The poem was wonderful, not much to say except 5/5.
~Br0k3n

Wow that is ril beautiful iv never read anything like it you have a talent
xx