A lovely poem, full of that anxious trepidation about committing yourself in an uncertain relationship.

Ahh, bugger it - tell him!

Amazing! In a simple sentence a pleasure to read, it was really nice and shows your uncertainty to making the first move out of fear of rejection.
Love is a complicated thing, but dont tell him, show him and if he rebuffs you then its his loss.
Tara xxxxxxxx

Very nice... this poem has a lot of meaning... if this is a true poem you need to talk to this person and tell them how you feel! You cant sit around and wait because people move on... if you dont feel comfortable talking to him about it, then hes not worth your time... think about that...

sammie

Aww this poem is so adorable. I can really relate to it... Great job 5/5

This is very strong, in the middle it was like I should cry. Good job! 4.9/5

We will grow old together.
Laughing on the cruises we'll spend our 80's on.
..xx