I like this............very awkward, and different...
reminds me of my own style, well done!

Keep on writing. *Props*

-Jin

Your awsome o yeah and your poem aswell 5/5

Hey its jen you talked to me earlier you are a really good writer keep it up i know the once lucky lady is lookin down on u realizing how much u really did love her your an awesome guy

Great poem i like this one the best outa of the rest for sum reason
5/5