Wow wonderful poem...and i can i feel the same ways some times..anyways great job

Wow, brilliantly writen :D I particularly like the topic that you chose. Some lines were confusing because of grammar, but I like how you kept the poem rhyming all the way through. A lot of people don't do that, so it's nice to see someoone that does :D Keep it up, 5/5

Hatori

P.S. If you get a chance, do you think that you could RRC a poem that I have writen? You don't have to, it's up to you :D

I like this. Its well defined and deferent

Its a amazing pretty good writing...

Wow! Nice poem ... Nice metaphorical expressions!

Excellent. I'll bet your poetry is even better in latvian. I can see that your poetic expression is strong, just not as much in the English language but your English is a thousand times better than my Latvian so keep 'em coming.

I like it

Very good, nice topic too. great job!!!