This isnt long at all! n i luvd it...there was a lot of emmotion, and this poem was gr8! btw thnx 4 the comment + replyin 2 my post!
~*Who Cares?*~

Hey Gemmie its luke... Excellent poem its beautiful and friggin true to the word! Keep it up (u hav so many poems!)

Wow, i really enjoyed reading this poem, you did a great job. i really liked this part
*You both treated me like something that came off your shoe,
and I spent all my time at home,
fighting to escape your clutches,
so why do I now feel the need for someone to hurt me here?
I'm happy here,
too happy

well done.....luv em

Very good poem. the strength and depth of the emotion made any flews there may have been totally supressed.

very good.

Awe wow... a truely beautiful poem... its amazing and real... wow...

sammie

Well I could understand feeling bad and feeling like you need their hurtful comment, but I think maybe tha's just cuz you were used to it, it was like home or something. well anyway thanx for the comment. good poem. 5/5