Wow, great poem, really caught the moment in those few lines, my favourite bit was the ending
one picture of you is all I have to see,
but every glimpse of it makes me happy,
any way i thought it was really good and i'd defenitly give it a 5!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow this poem is soooo special..especially to me....Love you Joclyn

Beautiful poem!!! you're both so talented. keep it up.
-xXx-

Awesome work man...you guys rocks...now and always!!! Hooray...lol...now I'm gonna go check Robert's work...how much I miss both of you...lol...great piece...

Im confused...is there like 2 people writing these poems? lol either way i think they rock so nicely done! -peace