Aww, so sweet, and so sad.
It touched my heart, aww i love poems like this *sniffle sniffle*
check out mine sometime
love Tara-Kay

Well one thing is for sure, I have neer read a poem like this before. It was truely amazing. I really liked the lines at the end that said "just help me close these eyes,
tear away my sky," Those were my favorite. Again, awesome job on this. This was definately a new, unique way to the whole "You dont love me my life is over" topic. You are a great writer. ^_^

~Anthony

Beautifully written. I feel it in my gut. Heartwrenching. I always look forward to your poems....talent and emotion.

Very heart wrenching but beautifully written.......... I can feel your pain all they way through....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela