Aw wow, This is such a beautiful poem, and I think it can be easy to relate to for many different reasons, the words are so beautifully put together it lets us use our imagination even the verse "Your breath of death still lingers,
Aura in the air,
I turn and look into your eyes,
But see that nothing's there.
" I can relate to that about my crush at the moment, but I'm sure it means a lot of different things to other people too, This is very well written, amazing as usual

TAKE CARE

Oooh, very good poem! brilliantly written as always! 5/5.
lots of luv,
xxemxx

Wow matt!!!
um i'm not sure who this is directed to...but there's is A LOT of emotion obviously, and u showed it extremely well..
I wish i could show this to my dad...wow.
Awesome as usual:P
much love xoxo

This is awsome I can relate. In my own little way. If you look at it and think. theres so many reasons you could label it to feeling hate and whatnot. My father is what I think of. Court baby! but really. You are so talented. And must have been through alot and seen so much to be able to write these. Its just amazing. When you get the chance you should check out some of mine.

- Ali