This seems so realistic and painful did it really happen to you?
good work

Its very interesting wish i cud say da same wit my mom anyway i think its sweet its a gud poem i congratulate u

Hey, its a little werid to read, but thats only because i'm not used to that format. it was a great poem tho. hard for me to personally nderstand though...
Ben
5/5

IT SEEMS PAINFUL but so well writen i like this coz its real and it shows ya true feelings

I really liked tht one Take Care Keep it up Have a great day :D

Karnivool

Another poem I think would help others in the same situation. Good stuff.

Awww that is sooo cute i loved that 1 i hope it works out for the best stay strong and i bet she loves you to :)
5/5

This is a good poem...i love your poems keep up the good work 5/5

Its long, and its good. you should have broken it into stanzas to make it easier to read.
much love
Me

That was a nice poem a really liked it, it touched my heart