Comments : Break up

  • 16 years ago

    by Mona

    Oo wow. Very good poem. I loved it. I could see it all happen in front of me. I felt the pain, the hopelessness yet the courage. The memories. wow. I can relate to this. Excellent work. Keep it up -xxx- and take care lotsaaa love

  • 16 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Nice job Jess. Like the words and its a very sad poem......, write more so i can read them and talk to you later in the chat room.

    ~Matt~

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very good poem....great emotion.....and it made me want to cry...your really good at writing...well lataz

    your friend,
    Robert Flores aka Switchblade.

  • 16 years ago

    by GemmaR

    Enjoyed this ..nice write with some good imagery.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    I love your poemememeem lol its really good i love all your poems in fact lol i love you!byebye

    BTW I RATED!!:D 5\5

  • 16 years ago

    by CaMeRoN

    Nice one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Halu Jess!!!!!! lol (I can't belive I still remember that.)
    That was a really good poem. While I was reading it out loud I started getting teary eyed and my voice was getting smaller and smaller...that sounds dumb but I don't know how else to describe it. lol This is the first time that I've ever read youre poems and I'm glad that I did because now I know that you're a fun girl, but you can express yourself beautifully too. I know this is long and I'm sorry. Keep up the good work!! (as if you need me to tell you lol)

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38

  • 16 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Awsome job, i love the way you wrote it and put it together it seems perfect take care much Love

    Nick

  • 16 years ago

    by shavaughn

    Good poem that was the best i could relate to that alot

  • 16 years ago

    by Paula

    I really like this it sparks off memories of my own

  • 16 years ago

    by JussxAxNobody

    Its been a long while since I read one of your poems. I'm glad I chose this one. You were always a wonderful writer, Jess.
    I loved it. It captured me...and I'm actually starting to write another poem RIGHT NOW because you are SO inspiring =)
    I hope to talk to you soon. Much love*Drew*

    o.O PENGUINS O.o (lol)