Oo wow. Very good poem. I loved it. I could see it all happen in front of me. I felt the pain, the hopelessness yet the courage. The memories. wow. I can relate to this. Excellent work. Keep it up -xxx- and take care lotsaaa love
Halu Jess!!!!!! lol (I can't belive I still remember that.)
That was a really good poem. While I was reading it out loud I started getting teary eyed and my voice was getting smaller and smaller...that sounds dumb but I don't know how else to describe it. lol This is the first time that I've ever read youre poems and I'm glad that I did because now I know that you're a fun girl, but you can express yourself beautifully too. I know this is long and I'm sorry. Keep up the good work!! (as if you need me to tell you lol)
Its been a long while since I read one of your poems. I'm glad I chose this one. You were always a wonderful writer, Jess.
I loved it. It captured me...and I'm actually starting to write another poem RIGHT NOW because you are SO inspiring =)
I hope to talk to you soon. Much love*Drew*