Comments : You knew I scarred easily

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg :'(...
    huni that is firstyly, a great poem, and secondly i see what you mean when you say our poems were alike...damn guys!!!
    chin up baby..i dont know what to say becoz i dont know the situation but hey...
    im here for u too..

    anna xox

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Really strong poem and I can tell it was written at a time where this was real and personal to you, I am glad you didn't hold back and let them feeling out!

    I think your ending was like an answer to yourself, you know it hurts so much because you tied yourself so tightly to them, that when they cut you loose it kind of killed a part of you. Ouich.

    I think you showed this situation well and used the correct amount of aggression and regret in your poem.