Comments : Enternal pain (true poem...)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Spirit of Ash

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    I loved your poem...and Im sorry for what happend.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    I Loved It. I Was In Tears. I Could See It. Someone Running And Slapshed With Water..The Emotions..Sorrow..Anger..All Of It Echoed...And I Could Picture every single movement Made.
    You're very Talented. Keep It Up.
    5/5

    -Ally