Comments : God Please Hear My Prayer

  • 18 years ago

    by tokish

    Excellent poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Nice poem. Really good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Luanne, you are a talented writer and it comes through in each poem, but this one, is most touching. Your heart and soul shine through. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    You have a beautiful heart Luanne. And I do hope that God hears your prayers and also mine for Nada. She is a wonderful, beautiful, loving and caring young lady and has the strength and strong will to help her overcome along with the prayers and help from God. Bless your heart Luanne for such a heartfelt, loving and touching write. Love you bunches.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully written, Luanne! It is such a touching and love filled piece. I really love the next to last stanza, simply perfection! Take care~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Jesus Luanne...I'm bawling Lol..i wasn't even for me...SNIFFLE!...well...*wipes away tear*...you beat me to it, I was on my way to write Nada a poem...yet the Lord a poem too and pray the same prayer..I prayed so hard last night for her and then to come home and read what she said..that she was better...I can't explain how happy I am now!...Wonderful wonderful write mom, this was just...unbeilevable....enough said...GREAT JOB
    With love,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Luanne,
    If you could only see the tears....I have never read a prayer any more sincere and beautiful in my entire life...You are so talented and I thank God I have had the priviledge of getting to know a heart as beautiful as yours...I know this touched Nada's heart because it truly touched mine...Luanne you're a precious and caring person with a big beautiful heart...I'm proud to call you my friend...AWESOME AND JUST BREATHTAKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Goody, good, good. a really good poem, full of passion and emotion. the wording was well used. My favorite stanza was the second one, it was absolutely wonderfully written. keep up the good work...i know you will, and i look forward to reading more...so until next time

    Brad

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I love the way this rhymes. beautiful write for a very special friend. we all love Nada and wish her all the best.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    What a sweet and touching poem! Everyone needs a friend like you, fantastic write!

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Luanne you are such a wonderful person. That was a beautiful poem. It was so very sincere.
    ~neens~