Comments : Could Love Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Beautiful poem Ben, very enchanting, deep and powerful. Sad as well. I hope you're okay, take care love. xxx

    Much love,
    Sarah.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Oh my God, Ben. This is a truly beautiful poem. I love all of it, but this part most of all:

    As the world passes you by,
    Your hearts falls to pieces,
    You think no one else sees you,
    You think no one else cares.

    It is so great. You're so talented. Keep it up.

    Tiffany. xox.

  • Hey hey guess who
    that poem captured my heart ben.... and u no it did, hehe
    and what u said earlier....... i guess i am who u think i am........ if that makes sense :S

    luv from me!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Ben....wow
    i cant say anymore your poems are so cute and whoever its describing is lucky to have you admire them
    That is such a adorable poem
    great
    x