Oooo i loved it great job. i can want for part 2:)

Wow .I loved that poem, the ending was the best , ooo getting back like that .
~April~

Excellent poem my friend. Revenge has never been so good.

Revenge is sweet.......... very well done on this write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Yes like the others have said "revenge is sweet"
Congrats on hitting the top rated ...
Well done on the poem , Anthony ..

HAHA That was a hot poem. Revenge, seems like something I write about all the time, but never this well. Awesome poem my friend :)

Very well done sweet revenge that's how you get them back but it still hurts even though you pretend it doesn't

Great poem loved it keep it revenge is sweet! keep on writing cant wait to read part two buh bye for now susan C

Aye homie, that was some real shit right thur. i like how towards the end u showed u ain't sweat it, 'n ended up doin u...that's what's up.

DAYUMMMM!!! AJ, I have never, never, ever, ever, seen this side of you!! That was hott as hell! You been reading some of my material??? LOL. j/k Wow...thats....revenge is sweeter than honey, ain't it...
~LOVE YOU!!!!!
Jessica aka "Jesstica"

DAUMMM, this is HOT!!!! I love the way you wrote this....DA BOMB!!!!

::MELI::

WOOHOO!! Excellent write Anythony! I like how you left the mystery in it...where you didn't let her know she had already been replaced! That adds a lot to the poem...I THINK. Pay back is a bi-tch....

I do have ONE tiny little suggestion...it's truly minor! Second line....first stanza...."Your whispers of your love" Maybe you could us -THE whispers - instead of YOUR since the first line used yours and you also have you in the end of the sentence...just a suggestion...take it as you will...

VERY NICE WRITE MY FRIEND!! If this is Part 1 I presume there will be a Part 2..? I'll be looking out.

Ya that was really interesting keep up the good work

Great job Anthony....revenge can be so sweet sometimes....

Love Ann

Very good... interesting words. 5/5

Revenge is sweet aint it? instead of being eaten up about it, you pretended
it didnt happen. it rocks!!!!!!!!!!!

You should\'ve f#cked him up, but nice strategy at the end.

That was such a cool poem........

Yeah, I've read this poem in school already and I still think it's good. =)

I like how the story is going, can't wait to read the next part.

As for the poem itself and how it was written, I just want to say, there were many flaws.

The story is brilliant, but sometimes there's an interruption in the poem and I have to reread it.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Wow that was packed with emotions...i really like the ending though it fits perfectly. She got what she deserved...I wish life were always like that.