Comments : Infedelity (Part 1)

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    Oooo i loved it great job. i can want for part 2:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Wow .I loved that poem, the ending was the best , ooo getting back like that .
    ~April~

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Excellent poem my friend. Revenge has never been so good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Revenge is sweet.......... very well done on this write.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Yes like the others have said "revenge is sweet"
    Congrats on hitting the top rated ...
    Well done on the poem , Anthony ..

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    HAHA That was a hot poem. Revenge, seems like something I write about all the time, but never this well. Awesome poem my friend :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lily

    Very well done sweet revenge that's how you get them back but it still hurts even though you pretend it doesn't

  • 18 years ago

    by Susan

    Great poem loved it keep it revenge is sweet! keep on writing cant wait to read part two buh bye for now susan C

  • 18 years ago

    by Brutal Passion

    Aye homie, that was some real shit right thur. i like how towards the end u showed u ain't sweat it, 'n ended up doin u...that's what's up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    DAYUMMMM!!! AJ, I have never, never, ever, ever, seen this side of you!! That was hott as hell! You been reading some of my material??? LOL. j/k Wow...thats....revenge is sweeter than honey, ain't it...
    ~LOVE YOU!!!!!
    Jessica aka "Jesstica"

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    DAUMMM, this is HOT!!!! I love the way you wrote this....DA BOMB!!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WOOHOO!! Excellent write Anythony! I like how you left the mystery in it...where you didn't let her know she had already been replaced! That adds a lot to the poem...I THINK. Pay back is a bi-tch....

    I do have ONE tiny little suggestion...it's truly minor! Second line....first stanza...."Your whispers of your love" Maybe you could us -THE whispers - instead of YOUR since the first line used yours and you also have you in the end of the sentence...just a suggestion...take it as you will...

    VERY NICE WRITE MY FRIEND!! If this is Part 1 I presume there will be a Part 2..? I'll be looking out.

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah poe

    Ya that was really interesting keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great job Anthony....revenge can be so sweet sometimes....

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Very good... interesting words. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by beautifuldisaster

    Revenge is sweet aint it? instead of being eaten up about it, you pretended
    it didnt happen. it rocks!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by MickDego

    You should\'ve f#cked him up, but nice strategy at the end.

  • 18 years ago

    by dancer

    That was such a cool poem........

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Yeah, I've read this poem in school already and I still think it's good. =)

    I like how the story is going, can't wait to read the next part.

    As for the poem itself and how it was written, I just want to say, there were many flaws.

    The story is brilliant, but sometimes there's an interruption in the poem and I have to reread it.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow that was packed with emotions...i really like the ending though it fits perfectly. She got what she deserved...I wish life were always like that.