WOW!!...i absolutely love it...sooo cute!!...it flows very well and is straight to the point!....awesome job!!..keep it up...love to look at more of your stuff!..*rates 5*
*~Meggy Lee~*

Awwe thats so good =)

Omg! such a cute poem! i love how its "five" words and not just "three". keep on writing with that beautiful talent! ;D 5/5

This is absolutely breathtaking! What a sweet and beautiful poem! Fantastic write!

That was really great. The way you wrote it was really good. First you introduced it slowly, I almost got confused, and then after awhile I became intrigued, and then with the conclusion it made me say "awwwwww". Thank you for that.

Very sweet, what any girl would love to have written about her! It really made me smile as I was reading it!

Awsome love it

Great poem!!! well put together... has a lot of meaning.... powerful.. unique. i give it a 5/5 but it deserves more points

This is an amazing poem ! simplistic, short and very cute! plz comment on mine..

G O R G E O U S poem!!!!!!! I'd love to have someone write something like that for me. So sweet!!! Good on you.
luv jess xoxo

I like it. The last stanza is my fav. It buids up to a point and gives a very good ending.
Keep writing! :)

How endearing. 'Twas rather delightful to read, indeed. =)

Awww it's sooo cute just aww
really flows well with a really sweet meaning behind it just awww it made me smile to read it :D