So sweet! Definately worth voting a 5!!

Awww this was so cute I loved it!!
p.s. pretty much all my poems are from real things that go on in my life daily and i rarely right things about stuff i've never experienced

This is a great love poem, but it doesn't really say a whole lot. no offense meant. not every poem has to be bursting with 10 meanings and 100 descriptions, I just wanted be honest. o, also, the rhythm was good, so keep it up!

Awww that was such a sweet poem, i loved it
good job!

Kris.

Like everyone else said, i thought it was a sweet poem.hhe.
one could really feel the love you have for that girl.
awesome write.
keep up the good work. :)