Wow, it's a really good poem..keep writting!! your wiked!!

I liked it all except the ending mayb u could edit it or sumthing idk but other then that it was great :) keep it up!

I liked it all except the ending mayb u could edit it or sumthing idk but other then that it was great :) keep it up!

Another nice one, dear.. I know what you mean in this poem.. 5/5