Very good gurl , keep it up, your doing great, i look forward to more

Awwww......I am in tears. I don't know who that's about but it reminds me of me and *runaway*. Hurry up and write the next part! I LOVE YOU ALWAYS SISSY!

I'm sorry...I re-read it. I cry everytime I do! Baby, you write so good! You are one of the only ones that can make me bawl my ****ing eyes out! I LOVE YOU SISSY! (always!)

Excellent and heartwrenching, a masterpiece, keep writing, you have a gift

Very very good
i like it a lot
luv hurts

Love this poem.. seems like a story.... 100/100 :P