Woho Kirsty! *shivers* Holy.. What a wonderfull poem. Damn. Amazing. Very good.

Wow.. Breathtaking sweety. Very well done.

Wow.. I'm speechless. I don't know what to say. It's very good. Excellent.

Keep up the good work hun.
I love you lotss,
Kisses and hugsss
-xxx-

Many coplicated words there

cor get you!

this reminds me of like a play and it's like a play of her life and her betrayal

i really like this onex.

Your writing is so well orchestrated, it shakes the very being of my soul... The emotions in it and the emotions that it stirs from within are unexplainable... Truely a master piece of fine literature... But also a fine expression of one's own emotions... Truely a master piece...
Check out some of my writings, maybe they can help you with life and the stuff it throws at you...

Much luv,

Josh