Aww... i can't believe you feel desserted in the rain... The rain is suppose to wash away all your sorrows... I love the rain.. >sorry, just a personal thought< but, great write... it was very touching... I loved the line-- will we dance in the rain-- very heartfelt...

Love,
Ipsita

Wow u are such a gr8 poet...u use wunderous words 2 hook he reader itno it...i luv the line will we dance in the rain..it is amazing...5/5 for SURE!!!!
~*Who Cares?*~

Awesome poem, yet again (i promise not to make mistakes on this comment!!)..um i loved it yet i thought it could've kept on going..maybe it's just coz i love reading your stuff!!
Take care xoxo

Nice poem...awesome...

The thing about your poems is the fact that many people can relate. And if they can't they can't denie the fact that your poems are powerful and well writin.
And this poem is not an exception. A brilliant example of how a poem should be writtin.
-.-.-.I should try writing 'bout the rain.-.-.-

love,
~*TasH*~

'how deep i was in your beauty's maze
without knowing you so much'... wow now thats something. She must have been on heck of a girl to make you feel that way. Well, you know what they say, 'you'll never know where you're going untill you know where you've been'. Looking back is good, but dont look back to regret.

Loved the poem. Its very deep and very heartfelt, specially the part "I feel so deserted in this rain" I sure can relate to that.

Love
Michelle

Nitin
Another beautiful yet sad poem of love....The word choices were excellent.

dreaming in between every thunder
if i would have had just one more chance
to say i am sorry, but now i wonder
if ever again in this rain will we dance

This stanza really touched my heart.
There is always a second chance :)
Take care dost.
Love Cindy