Comments : Look closer

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Very neatly written, i really liked it, was so sad 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl t0uching lines. very deep and heartfelt

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Nice rhymes. Another sad poem.
    But it was good. Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    Nice work.you write good poems. keep 'em comin.
    Tes