He good job!!!

Another great poem, it was also sad 5/5

The lost of a loved one
The LOSS of a loved one
bear should be bare
for the full of lonely days thing I thought you should have used a word other than full when you put down the nights of dispair.
to close to family and friends should be TOO close to faimily and friends.
I really loved the fith stanza. :)
It was an alright poem. It wasn't my favorite. 3.

Wow... this is so beautifully written.
it's also unique... talking about the loss of some one, not how it happened, but how you're affected... amazing
it flowed really well, the rhythm was a bit jumpy in some places, and the rhymes were great...
5/5

~Sandra

It's saying that even though a loved one is gone and has died that you will see them again eventually when you pass on. It points out how much family guides you and loves you. How much they support you and lend a shoulder to cry on.

I can relate to this because I recently lost my uncle that I was really close to. But like it says in your Poem I will see him again.