Very well written! The imagery is flawless, as is the flow! I really like the whole "Green fades into myth and dream" line, just lovely!
However, I found this line to be kind of awkward:

"Replaced with huge, fire of love"

It kinda broke the flow, but that may just be me. I'm not sure if you meant "Replaced with a huge fire of love" or "Replaced with huge fire's of love".
Anyway, wonderful piece! Keep it up~Holly

Great job Jacklyn....this was beautiful. I truly enjoyed this piece more than you can know....

Love Ya, Ann

A frosting of spirit across the world
Blooming white roses upon the trees
The most celebrated birthday
Filled with excitement and white roses.

^ my favorite part. this poem really embodies the depth of winter. I love everything about this poem... I love the snow, the spirt and white roses. winter is my favorite season.

Beautiful job!!!