Comments : I still.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady C

    OMG!! that soooo beautiful...I think Im gonna cry
    Keep it up *sob*

  • 18 years ago

    by dezi

    Very touching, nicely done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Porton

    Oh this is so sad.

    I think you did a great job though, keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Wow... I couldn't have put that into a better poem... The emotion behind those words was just... Wow... Good job! I'm glad I found this poem. You're a really good writer, keep writing! My favorite stanza was:
    "This will be my last goodbye...
    I've nothing else to say.
    Everything I felt for you,
    Can now just fade away. "
    It was just a wonderful way to end it... Great job!

    ~BJ~