Wow this is a really kewl poem carry on writing

Wow that is a good poem

Hang in there you are a really good poet.

Nice poem, keep riting hope your ok, 5/5

Love it 5/5

This is cool. I like it

I really enjoyed readin this poem, short and to the point! you've done well
luv em

I was gonna rebel and not do what you wrote but i did anyway
lol
great poem filled with emotion
thanks for sharing your talent
em

Hayley, is this your story?...
...Omg pls dont do that again, i duno wat id do if i lost you...
Id lose it if I lost you...

the poem is sad, i cud feel your emotions... take care always
nd im here for you..

Wow....im impressed