Good job... that was so deep.. and something totally different from what we find here on this site... I think it was ver well written... keep writing..

love,
Ipsita

Wow, this poem was deep. i luvd ur poem, it was so unique. thnx 4 the comments on my stuff..i appreciate it. anyway, gr8 work..5/5 4 sure!
~*Who Cares?*~

Omg i love it! so much it's amazing definet 5/5

This is wonderful! You really know how to caputre the feelings. It makes me sad to read yet able to connect to what you are saying. It's beautiful!

Would that suggest you've kept faith?
i may be mistaken but if that's the case...Nitin, i'm proud of u..hang on and hopefully this lady can see how special you are and how much you care.
Much love xoxo

That's amazing...manage to impress me...wow...u improve a lot...that's really good...this poem is just beautifully written...keep going young man...u r still young...

Hi nitin
well again i liked ur poem. it had such a depth in it. good job.
take care, bharti

I'm slowly but surely working my way though all your poems =)
And this one is just another diamond for your treasure box =)
Well written with some wonderful wording (check out the onomatapiea (sp?) there!) lol

"but here we are, sitting face to face once again
you regret for the words you said that day
and i am paying the price for trying to take my life away"

My fave stanza. Excellently worded
5/5
*Gem*

Nitin
So much deep emotion in this poem. Brings tears to my eyes. Excellent piece. So much pain and sadness.

though now it feels so late
but after so many years, we feel the same way
in my life will their be another day?
i cant breathe anymore but i could hear people pray

Love this ending. You have such an amazing talent.
Love Cindy